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Tg Ben 10 fan fic prt 1

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Ben 10 tg fan fic by Danimov


Be warned you may get excited or not and if not..., screw you lol enjoy
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“Hey Grandpa, come look at this” Ben said as he was fiddling with the Omnitrix
“What is it Ben” he replied.

“Well I found a new button on the Omnitrix; it was hidden under a flap on the side” Ben said slightly confused at the fact he hadn’t seen it before.

“Does it say anything on it” Max (Grandpa) said curiously
“I think I can make out  m------e------n------u, wow I didn’t know this thing had a menu” Ben said “well lets take a look then” max said.

Ben pressed the menu button and suddenly a holographic display appeared above the watch no bigger than an I-pod screen.

A look of excitement and glee came over Bens face as the menu read first on the list of selectable tabs ‘alien skin creation’ “wow, Grandpa look at this” Ben shouted. Max’s eyes moved to the holographic menu,
“That is weird I know my fair share of information on the Omnitrix yet this menu you have found it completely new to me and by the looks of it, it says you can make and customise the aliens you want to turn into… now Ben, I would prefer if you would leave this menu alone until tomorrow so I can study it if full”

Ben let out a large whine and started rambling how it was unfair but he was stopped in his tracks by the now shouting Max “NOW BEN…. THIS OMNITRIX IS NOT SOMETHING TO JUST PLAY WITH, IT’S A VERY LARGE RESPONSIBILITY, SO JUST START ACTING LIKE YOU DESSERVE IT, NOW GO TO BED” Ben dipped his head in a sulk and went and got into bed…

Later that night every one was asleep but Ben, and despite what his grandpa said Ben once again pressed the menu button, the whole campervan light up in a very dim green glow as the holographic menu appeared. “Right then” Ben said in a rather anxious but quiet voice, he clicked on the alien skin creation tab and a even bigger holographic screen came up about the size of a normal laptop screen, the glowing green holographic display was sprawled with other menus with scroll down boxes, tick boxes and many multiple selection tabs, a slightly evil grin came to Bens face as if he had just inherited an extreme amount of power.

Ben looked at the first text box it said ‘planet’ Ben assumed it meant what planet he wanted an alien from, he scrolled down the huge list of planets until he got to one he thought was interesting, the planet ‘Terra’ “that planet sounds cool” thought Ben. Little did Ben know, Terra is the name for earth that scientist would use if ever they had to tell the name of our planet to aliens. Anyway Ben moved onto the next text box which had a selection of two things, ‘Homo sapiens’ or ‘Bestial’, Ben decided to chose Homo sapiens not knowing what either of the selections meant anyway and that brought him to another selection of two again, either concubine or retainer.

Ben took one look a that selection and almost immediately chose concubine because he didn’t want an alien that sounded like he was supposed to have in his mouth, once again little did he know retainer is another word for man (trust me, look it up) and concubine is another word for women.

The next text box said Trichnoid pigment, Ben new that the word pigment meant colour so he assumed it mean the colour of the alien, he clicked on it and a colour selection screen came up, Ben thought about it and then chose a sort of brown colour because it was what he thought he wanted but once again, little did Ben know Trichnoid is another word for hair.

Next their was another selection box it said retinal pigment, Ben thought ‘Ah I know this one, retinal means eye so this must mean eye colour, Ben then decided on a dark brown colour to match what he thought was the colour of the alien,

Coming to the end of the text boxes he reached another that said ‘coiffure’ which means basically ‘hair do’ Ben had know idea what this word meant so he clicked on the glowing green selection box and it came up with a whole list of things to tick. Ben immediately thought that if he had to tick things off that he wanted it must be armour or something, because Ben didn’t know what half the words meant he just picked the ones that looked the coolest, he picked: ‘protracted spiral locks’ (which we all know means long curly locks) once he had chosen those three the others faded out, Ben just assumed he was only aloud to select one set of armour.

The next text box said attire which means clothes but we all know that Bens not smart enough to know that, he clicked on the box and their was another endless list of words that where alien to Ben, he let out a sigh and then he saw a button next to the box that said randomise. He thought that selection would be good because then he wouldn’t have to pick, so he clicked on randomise and these words came up ‘curtail colloq’
(Small dress).

The second to last text box said ‘ancillary’s’ which meant accessory or accessories, once again Ben couldn’t be bothered to figure it all out so he just clicked on the randomise box and it came up with ‘basic maquillage’ which actually means basic make-up.

The last box was quite simple it said ‘how long would you like your alien skin to last once you activate it’ Ben thought to himself in awe, he couldn’t believe it, he could now control how long he would have the alien out for instead of it running out of battery when he doesn’t want it to, Ben moved the bar from the lowest setting which was ‘one minute’, to the highest setting which was ‘forever’.

Ben then clicked ok at the bottom of the page which then said would you like to save your alien skin, Ben clicked yes and with a big smile on bens face the computer said alien skin saved as ‘Homo Sapien Concubine’ and the holographic screen disappeared Ben went to sleep dreaming of what his new alien will look like and how it would feel to control it, he couldn’t wait till morning so he could test it out……..
Too be continued………... Soon hopefully

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If you didn’t find this very entertaining I think the second part will be a lot better
here is a practice story just to see if i can actually write anything good that people will like and also if hey dont fall asleep half way throught i would like to here lots of comment, it doesnt matter if hey are critisisms but they must help me in a little way to improve my self
Thanks!
oooo and to al people that dont watch ben 10 the story is basicly this...
ben is a quite average but very ignorant kid who basicly happens to stumble apon a aline device which is called the Omnitrix this device allows him to change into various aliens from different planets....
thier u go lol
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Totally awesome. Already read part two. can't wait for part 3!!!